I ADDED AN ADDITIONAL CANOPY TO THE BACK. I WILL POST UP THE PLAN AND A CLEAR RENDRING SHOWING IT FIT IN WITH THE STRUCTURE AND A NEW SITE PLAN SHOWING THE CHANGES I MADE.
You are coming along. As it appears that you are satisfied with the massing as is and are not moving toward pushing it any further, start thinking about materiality. there is still too much "architectural white" going on here to get a feel for the actual intention of the space.
Also, work toward a visualization technique that illustrates the groundscape. It is still unclear if there is topography or just lines on paper.
I agree with Andy. When we speak in class you discussed the changes in elevation of the landscape, but when I see these images it is still very flat. I think you really needed to take that walk through Brooklyn Bridge Park. I think if you cut a section through your site, you would see it being still very flat.
You are coming along. As it appears that you are satisfied with the massing as is and are not moving toward pushing it any further, start thinking about materiality. there is still too much "architectural white" going on here to get a feel for the actual intention of the space.
ReplyDeleteAlso, work toward a visualization technique that illustrates the groundscape. It is still unclear if there is topography or just lines on paper.
I agree with Andy. When we speak in class you discussed the changes in elevation of the landscape, but when I see these images it is still very flat.
ReplyDeleteI think you really needed to take that walk through Brooklyn Bridge Park.
I think if you cut a section through your site, you would see it being still very flat.